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  1. Spacing is now compact. It’s a little spacey between S and E. Then RST is a little dense. So we have a few spacey oases with dense parcels. Spacey KAI, TUH, TOL. Then we have RST, LST, and LZ.
    What will save this corrected yet still problematic logotype is the introduction of color or another shade of blue. A whole another impression, I bet! 🧐

    1. Yeah, the color will definitely change everything. But when it comes to kerning, I always suggest using black on white since it’s the most contrast and it always should be judged there first.

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